Amigo,
Primero que nada, me da mucha alegria ver que escribiste un nuevo poema. Eres un poeta super interesante y talentoso. La verdad es que extranaba muchisimo tu poesia! Muchas gracias por tu lindo comentario en mi poema, casi me pongo a llorar de felicidad! ^_^ Great poem, cuidate!

This is flawlessly written, and the concept is depressing but dignified at the same time, and that is ofen hard to acheive. amazing stuff.
The story behind this peice is intriguing, and i look forward to reading parts 2 and 3.
stef/xx

Very nice job with this... its extremly well written and has most definetly impressed me as well as caught my attention... keep up the good work; i look forward to reading more of your work including, hopefully soon parts two and three...

sammie

Wonderful work. This is so well done. I'm can't wait to read the rest.

Again, this is very well written, but i wouldn't expect anything less from you!

You're use of words is brilliant, very well doene.
5/5

xxx cici xxx