Alright well, unfortunately my computer doesn't let me leave comments for the love poems, but I have infact read 'unrhymed love' and it was another really well done piece. I really like your stuff, and so far have no complaint at all. The comments above, for this poem, well to them it might not have had a very good flow, but while I was reading it, I noticed no rhyme or rhythm matters to work on. It all seemed very good to me. Excellent jobs on them all. :)

Wow intense..nice ontinuation...way to hold your readers attention.

LISSA

I really liked it a lot and have nothing to really say =] great poem!
~Sandra~