Hey. Thanks for all of your comments, I really appreciated them. I have read a few of your poems, unfortunately I can't comment on the love ones (something signs me out :S) but I would just like to say that they were also really good. This one wasn't your best one, but it was still good. One of the things I noticed, is you write just as you speak. With the word 'like' places that it isn't needed. For example:

you were all I ever talked about
to 'like' everyone I Knew

I thought maybe you could replace that slang kind of thing with:

you were all I ever talked about
to almost everyone I Knew.

Anyway, that's my two cents for this particulary poem. Otherwise though, it was pretty good. Keep up the good work, I hope to see more from you! :)

This was wonderful. i can relate alot.
5/5