Comments : Savior

  • 14 years ago

    by Torn

    Omg...
    i do not believe that you are 13. DO NOT BELIEVE IT!!
    matt can i send these to a publisher?
    Serious, your poems give me more hope than anything i have encountered.
    Thank you, and please do not stop writing. Because even if u dont realise it, you're keeping me going.
    You are the best..always have been, always will.

    U put a smile on my dial:)

    Much love, always,
    -the coolest name..:P
    luv anna xoxoxo

  • 14 years ago

    by BeautifulDisaster

    First of alll LMAO at the begining of the poem when you said sometimes returned hehe thats so cute lmao :P Second of all this is yet another brilliant poem hun, it's like you've written a story and painted a portrait with words all at once, absolutely breath-taking i dont know where you get your inspiration but it is magical hun keep on writing and take care,xxoo

  • 14 years ago

    by xEmmax

    Wow! i an stunned yet again matt! that was incredible. i loved how u made it like a story, with a really important message at the end, that was clever. amazing stuff! xxxxxx

  • 14 years ago

    by master of shadow

    Brilliant peice. really truly briliant. yuo wrote it so well and the story was so clear.

    5/5

  • 14 years ago

    by Samantha

    Wow this is amazing! are you sure your only 13??? your vocabulay was fantastic and the rhyming was amazing and the story was simply flawless! keep it up! you honeslty have me impressed and you will most definetly be added onto my favorites list.. nice work!

    sammie

  • 14 years ago

    by Trampled Angel

    Hey! You have been on my favorites for a long time lol, I am glad I have earned yours in return. You gave me such strong heartfelt comments, thank you so much, you did indeed make me smile which is something rare so thank you. Now for the poem: Hun this was really inspired and heartfelt really really sweet. You have such a beautiful view of the world and the meaning of us being in it. I take it you're religious? I am too. I was really touched by this poem almost as if it was speaking to me. Thank you for posting it hun. BTW, your profile says you are 13 now?! I missed you birthday! *cry* Well anyway, happy birthday to you hun. How is your girlfriend doing, the one you care about so much. She is really luck to have you, that's for sure. Thanks for being my friend, that sounds really corny, lol, but it is true. C ya!

    -Tainted Mikochan

  • 14 years ago

    by Me&You (simply magical)

    This poem was absolutely b r e a t h t a k i n g...........you have serious talent....this poem just spoke out to me and was basically dancing on my computer screen....this poem seriously needs to get published = D keep up the great work
    luv jess xoxo

  • 14 years ago

    by ~â‚£ading |nspiration~

    OMG, that was totally awesome, again, haih, u will make it 2 the poetry world, believe me, u will, this is a masterpiece...

  • 14 years ago

    by wanted dead or alive!

    Wow what a moving poem! so insightful and touching!
    you clearly have a talent and are definatley going on my favourites :)
    keep it up!!!!!
    take care
    xx xx xx

  • 14 years ago

    by angelwolf

    I really liked what your poem sayed about god and how he helped her but he doesn't always help you when you ask i'm still praying to no avail maybe the day i do finally give up he will answer.

  • 14 years ago

    by Cody

    I enjoyed this poem and its story form, it was wonderful, I think I'll go read a few more of your poems now

  • 14 years ago

    by kimberly

    I liked that very nice

  • 14 years ago

    by niko

    Omg this is exactly what ive been feelin now n ive been down 4 sooooo long n God's finally gotten thru 2 me n this is like perfect timing 4 my life n i just love it its an awesome poem keep up the awesomeness work!!!!!!!
    ~Niko~

  • 14 years ago

    by Kristina

    This is a great poem.Keep up the great work

  • 14 years ago

    by Kara

    Beautiful!! I love it! You got talent!

  • 14 years ago

    by Arie

    That was amazing! You are a very awesome and powerful writer! omg, i loved it and that is soo true..i agree with every word! Keep up the good work, that was amazing!

  • 14 years ago

    by aliiiii

    It was amazing. More than anything I've ever read. Keep writing! 5/5