Comments : Your First Sweet Seduction

  • 18 years ago

    by ratchild666

    Youve made the imagery in this poem really beautiful. well done it really great.
    stef/xx

  • 18 years ago

    by Live, Laugh, Love

    Aww that is very very cute.. IT's full of emotion.. Well done

  • 18 years ago

    by Robert

    Its very well written and interesting too. very descriptive too, and thats what i love most in it! well done, i can say this is my fave from those ive read. tc xx

  • 18 years ago

    by Charles

    That poem was real sweet. hw old were u..... r u still 2geva???