LOVEEEEEE IT STILL LOL PLEASE READ MORE OF MY POEMS..

The flow was a bit halted but overall a sad poem
im sorry u feel this way
5/5
love
amy

WOw!! I absoloutly love it! BRILLIANT! Its deep && very full of emotion! I really felt what you were saying. 5/5.
Keep up the great writing!
Bec xx

Wow... I love it... Powerful and emotional. I'm sorry if the content is real... never blame yourself cause it's definitely not your fault. Great write! 5/5 Thanks for you r/c.

Wow, This is tough, Really good peice though! It's got alot of emotion in it, And i love it!

luv natz x0x

Congrats, you won the second place in my competition with this great poem. :D I love it

Great job! I really liked this. It had a lot of emotion. I am sorry your father is not there now, but if you stay strong through everything that's all that really matters. You take care and keep writing! 5/5

As everyone has said many times this truly a fantabulous piece of work, in fact it's more than thattt it's real, raw and as if your heart beat it out onto the page. The rhyme is so goood. I love the way you used the title!

Fav line:

"That is one half apart of me."

[lostlaureate -come find me]

Great job.. you can really feel the pain in this one

Wow...=)...wonderful poem! keep up the good work, i enjoy reading it.

That is one of the best poems I have read in a while. I read your profile you are way to modest. You are a awesome writer. Keep up the great writing. I'll add you to my favorites!

I totally understand this poem..my dad isnt around either. great writing, 5/5

This reflects me of what my life is...i can't comprehend but it's what is really is...thank you