Yeah i agree with britt....this one was really different!!! It felt like someone in my head was chanting it while i was reading it. Your style is amazing and unique!!! Keep it up!!
luv jess xoxo

Another masterpiece. There's not much I can say really, just that you're very talented and I'm glad to have gotten the chance to read your work. I look forward to reading more :). 5/5 once again

I like this poem alot. its short, but sweet and gets the point through, great job!

That's crazy awesome.. i love the words.

Very powerful, cleverly rhymed and timed for maximum impact...the last stanza especially.....it rawked...

[lostlaureate - come find me]

I didn't feel much for the last stanza but the rest of it was short and to the point. I don't know much to say other than clever job.

Amazing poem, uniquely written. I actually don't understand the last stanza, but the rest of the poem is excellent. 5/5