Thats was brilliant, you see so many poems about the same thing but they just dont shine as much as yours. well done!

This is a brilliant poem and yes i too lovedthe last stanza, there was just something about it...well i could really relate to it i guess!!! Your poem was beautiful!!!
luv jess xoxo

I rlly liked it. nice wording and presentation. keep writing. plz comment on some of mine if u get the time.

Wow! I really liked that one. Definately a 5/5 and no complaints. Great write!

Once again i am amazed by ur writting. i wish i could write liek you!! lol. great job hunnie!

Really well written adn full of very strong expression.

5/5

Brilliant poem, full of expressina nd very well written