Hey that was pretty good. I personally, don't believe in karma for this reason. People who really deserve a break don't necissarily get one. *sigh* but I guess there's not much we can do about it, except to stay strong. Right? Anyway, the poem was really good and with a nice flow. However I think,( in my opinion anyway - which isn't really important, i just thought i'd share)This line seems rather forced:
I've made some bad decisions,
OK...maybe a lot.

I don't really have a good idea as to what you can change it to, but there's plenty of words that would work that wouldn't take away from your rhyme scheme. For example, one idea (one which you could probably out-do but I might as well give you something to work with)

I've made some bad decisions,
And their lessons I was taught.

--I don't really know how good that sentence is, and I'm sure you can do much better, so feel free to disregard anything/everything.

Anyway, that's enough from me. It was really good and I wish you all the best. Keep up the good work :)

Brilliant poem. reall well written. personally i dont believe in karma, dont really believe in god either.....basicly for this reason. bad things happen to good people and if there is a "god" then sure they are just really bored so like messing up peoples lives...

anyway. the poem was very well written. it flowed quite well and really convayed your feelings.

5/5

Wow, u are a very good writter, im puttin u on my favs. great job again! and hunnie stay strong, i feel like that all the time. just remember lifes a b**** and then u die!! lol

This poem was beautiful!!!!!! A job well done and it flowed really well!!!! And it really portrayed your feelings!!! Keep up the great work and i'm looking forward to reading more of your poems
luv jess xoxo

I love your poem because I can really relate....GREAT JOB! :)

GREAT JOB!! 5/5... i've many times cried out the same words and asked god to take this pain away and stop making my life living hell.. u did EXCELLENT!!

kaykay

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Wow, that was really good. u have a way with words. great job. check mine out and tell me what u think.

Hey thanx so much for all of your comments you seem to comment me the most of anyone thank you so much!!
-Rachel