Comments : A goodbye (part four)

  • 18 years ago

    by Matthew A.

    Damn Robert this poem scared the poop out of me..I felt the pain in my arms when I read this...really kool. Anyways, its really good and hope to read the last part soon.

    ~Matt~

  • 18 years ago

    by xGreenHeartx

    Aw thats sad, but its a very good poem. keep up the great work!!!
    Meganxox

  • 18 years ago

    by Cristian Teo Regalado

    Thats was really good for part four...but I got some bad news I moved back to Sa town so I'm not going to get to talk to you as much but we''l still talk but when I left you should have seen Laura I felt really bad because i couldn't do anything to help her but she busted out in tears...But if you she her can you tell her I said Hi...And also tell Matt I said hi...Well later for now...Peace

  • 18 years ago

    by Fighter (Ariane L.)

    *is in awe* wow.................. im speechless...... (as usual in front of your work) i mean, WOW!! you truly are amazing. stay strong and take care,
    -xXx-

  • 18 years ago

    by ~â‚£ading |nspiration~

    Ok...alright...cool poem...damn cool...can't wait for the next part...this is awesome...