Thanks to Sunny for the inspiration on this one by supplying a title to work with. :)

Simon,
that was a great and amazing poem my friend. Always take care, many hugs.

Wow, I love it, deep and dark..... love how you pulled it all together with those peppermint lips...... wonderful write SiE.....

Do you dare to touch her forbidden hips
Or stare in her eyes for an obscure view...

Just wanna let you know that this is my favorite part of the poem, don't ask... I just like it! Great poem Simon.

Great job Simon...you nailed it, that's for sure....

Love Ann

Awesome job Simon .... Loved it !!

Wow, I love this! Very mysterious and dark, but so passionate! It's simply fantastic!