Good work. Keep it up.

This is a beautiful poem! i love it it makes the image of a rose stand out perfectly in my mind and i can almost smell it! awsome job! 5/5!

Heya love the poem :)
~Metal_Queen~

Hey,
I love the poem! You're a great writer!

Hey,
Great poem. Short and sweet.
~~Sweetie

After i read this poem i was like - 'Awww thats well sweet.' Really like these lines-
'Petals gently ruffled by the breeze
Yet so warm and serene.'
Thank-you for your comment one mine, thought i would return the favour :) Keep up the good work!

I liked this poem so much. It reminds me of laying in the grass on a hot summer day, next to a rose garden. The words you used fit so well together.