This is a good poem you put emontion it to it its sounds like there is this girl talking to people but they wont listen to her you have talent keep up the good work

:o... THAT WAS AMAZING I REALLY LIKED IT.... wow .... ur an amazing writter keep it uppp ...

Hey i really liked it...
but i have a suggestion...try makin it a little shorter and removing the unimportant parts...cos i might be young is said a little too often...
but maybe that has a purpose...so its just a suggestion
but i loved it!!!!!!!
keep writing...you show true talent...
dhaval

We're young but strong. we're the new generation so be proud, man. I Like the poem it has a real power in it. A driving force that made me keep reading. nice job and keep
writing.