Marjan, congrat to you....you're greater than great writer nor "poet" you deserved it! may these day till then bright your life. once again....Congratulation!

That was amazing...I felt your pride in giving to others less fortunate...great poem...i loved it..

Innocent Crybaby*

Touching & wonderful. It's sad some things are true.

Hey Marjan,

Your poem was a pure delight to read, it had imagery, diction was almost perfect and the rhyme scheme was good.

I must say I am impressed by you Marjan and hope you go on to become a great persian writer.

Wonderful job. Great feelings and deep meaning. keep it up!

Noni

This is wonderful! I still remember when a long time ago you were curious about so many things =) its great to see you in the top poems list. you rock=) i love this poem too... its so angelic.

Marjan

I am so very proud of you. You have developed a style of writing that is quite unique and very distinct. What you write is pure and we (the readers) can tell that it is very, very heartfelt and true. I love you so much...

With the Greatest Of Joy,
Tristan

I really liked your poem it was strong and very touching

Wow this one is amazing and i loved it so much. your twritting is very unique and exellent. great job!

This is incredibly powerful and beautiful. Fantastic - I r eally loved every minute of it. Nice theme, just if only more people were genuine and charitable like then we might live in a better world.

Peace x

Nice poem

Wow! really good with a strong purpose and meaning. 5/5

x

That was a very good poem one of the bet poems i have saw on here this is what i call real poetry!!

Good job on all your poems i read them all and they said u can make something of yourself one day

That's good .. apoem that really express life..
a girl who knows out there there are people who is in very need..
congradulations

Very good i could use some tips from you congrats on getting first. you seem to have a love for writting

Wow! I love this poem..its beautifully written! Good job ;)

Wow... that Poem was clearly one of the best poems i've ever seen, Great Job on that poem, You have a very Unique talent that very few have, KEep writing :) 5/5

Colt

Wow When I grow up I wanna write as p\good as you...gr8 job!

What an amazing poemmmm.