Intersting to write about..but its a other good one that you wrote.
Keep it up
Juls

Wow that was amazing i totaly love it 5/5 please comment on some of mine

This is reall very well written and full of feeling.

5/5

This is a good poem
it written very well
excellent job again
keep writing
love always
tabby

Hey this poem is really good. I like the whole subject and topic you chose. Wonderful. I read this poem a lot. Not too long not too short, not too deep not too shallow, everything was just right. The flow was perfect also.

Except for one line:
The sun seems to be hiding from me, Its glorious rays,

It's too long compared to all the other lines.

Great rhyming scheme.

This was outstanding! Never stop writing!

I love the choice of words. they make the poem different. :)