Your poeam is very unique dont ever say ur writen material is not good because its comming from ur heart and thats all that matters

-chi chi

I can feel your pain........

i'm kinda hurting all over too, just in different ways and the same. you know how one little mistake ruins everything? it makes me cry... but i have to be strong and so do you! put a smile on your face, even when you want to cry, because you never know who's fallen in love w/ ur smile.

Omg. I loved this... because I felt like I was right there and that it was all happening to me. If that makes sense =) But I really liked the way you wrote this, and I hope you're okay...
This is my favorite part:

and when you find you've broken me,
you'll find that i am gone.

Great job hun!

Thats so true about how alot of guys work don't let them bring you down

This is soo sad , ur poem is very clear and understood dear, am so sorry if this is true .. 5/5