Comments : Can You See Now?

  • 18 years ago

    by eternitySOlong

    I can completely relate. Only, I would write part of it to my mom and the other part to my "father". I loved it!

  • 18 years ago

    by Mona

    Wow Emma you really gave this poem your all. So much anger in it. I can feel the pain. I think it was your heart that spoke. It touched me. Very sad poem sweety. Beautiful written. Just keep writing, try to get it of your chest. And if you ever feel like talking, remember I'm here. Take care sweety, love ya -xxx-

  • 18 years ago

    by Avellana

    Your poems are becoming so much deeper. I love them, and really look forward to reading more.

    Luvs n Hugs, Me. x

  • 18 years ago

    by Allison

    Wow this is a really great poem Emma. I've read your other poems too and might I say, you're a great writer. Keep it up. You have some real feelings that you know how to express.

  • 18 years ago

    by Bertha

    I love how you always put so much raw emotion into everything you write! i can tell it all comes from your heart!!