THIS WAS WRITTEN FOR A CONTEST ON THE ALL POETRY SITE

WOW, that was probably the best I have read! I have been gone a while but Im am very happy when this is what I come back to!!
This poem, I cannot say too much as I will lose myself in the fanasty you created. Perfect flow and diction. Very ambigious in style, very word meaning something else. Thought provoking with so much visionary passion. Im off to read more of your work now, as you seemed to have been very busy!! Lucky me!!

Your friend
Hayley

This is proabably my favorite out of the ones I have read so far. I loved the mening behind it and I liked how you use this kind of topic alot.

~Retniapdoolb~