Wow... this is such an honest poem.. it has a lot of emotion in it mostly pain and envy right? very well written... strong word about your feelings.. very emotional great poem keep it up =)

--emotionless19*

Awwww... This is such a sad poem . I was totally into it . Besides a few missing words, or incorrect words . I say It's brilliant . Your a very talented writter and I'm really going to enjoy reading more of your poetry .

Keep up the good work
Letty

Wow, i liked this poem because its something i can relate to.
well done
love tara-kay

I feel the exact same way

I love your poem and i know how you feel......
anyway 5/5