Omg great poem!! you have real talent.. Keep up the great work..
Love Tiff

Brilliant poem.

Oh hey, this is so so cool, man, where did u get all those words, the usage of words r amazing, I actually hev 2 check the dictionary while reading this poem, no kidding, my english is not good lol, this is so cool...definitely a masterpiece...great 2 c u around...

You're so passionate. It's breathtaking. I would never have thought to describe love the way you do. It's...well...amazing, really. You're so excellent at this.

Nicley put. well worded. very very impressive. keep up the great work.

I noticed you used a large amount of words in your poem . Some people might not have understood it, or may have been intimidated by it, because they had to look up those words in the dictionary . Before I say anything more I would like to congradulate you on a poem wonderfully written . To me it's a masterpiece that need a few minor touch up's . I agree with serena, when she say's the words "stupidly " and "moronically" are heavy words in a non-poetic way . But that is all I agree with . To me you really put a lot of feeling and emotion behind the words you chose to use . You didn't hold back anything and that is part of being a true poet . So pat yourself on the back for a job well done . If you keep writting poems like this I'll be one your biggest fans . Welcome to my fav's .

Keep up the good work .

Your new fan
Letty

Hey i love your poems.
THanks for your comments on mine

OmG ur so talented.. ur poems fantastic well done and keep up the great work!! mwaz stephy :)

Great work, your word usage is great. I like all the symbolism you use.

Hey wow the poem was great.. your use of words that are often not used in the word of poetry were great.. but i also have to agree "stupidly moronically" are not words needed.. you show alot of emotion through your words but those two are not good for that line i guess.. but other than that it was great!! i really loved it.. thanks for the comment on my poem means alot to me.. cYa ~D~

This poem was exilent..
lia