I like this song alot...it's real good..very deep

comment some of my things plz =]

That was moving and i was touched. did you write the notes for it? (musical notes) 5/5

I love it..
do you know how you will be singing it, because i would love to hear it one day!!

Aiight I have sung it to myself and to a friend of mines and she thinks is hot...but I wont be the one putting music behind it...they needed the lyrics and thats what I gave them. But my friend who will be takin care of it is awesome...he always has me hooked on his songs and they aint even done,...thats his problem he starts them but never finishes them...but we'll see where that takes them..its a little fast like the first two lines are slow then the third real fast...lolz I dunno how to explain...Its aiight I am proud of it. It has me smiling, lolz thanx 4 the comments....love ya!!!!!

::MELI::

Being as good as the LYRICS were I would like to appreciate the PLOT that it unfolds..a very awkward and yet a very realistic and frequent happening.
:)

Please do post the full edition , m waiting to look into it.

I loved it, there seems to be nothing that you should change. I hope that your song gets sold and makes millions... ;D Keep it up

Heidi

I liked it its like my poem stuck on a love maybe you shoukd read it and tell me what you think but its a good song

Wow thiz is an excellent song/poem i cud tell u put a lot of effort in 2 it n i love ur use of wordz!! well i wish u gud luck wif sellin it coz thiz iz truly worth sellin well newayz juss thought i wud show sum respectz!! n ill b lookin 4 ward 2 readin sum more of ur work!!!5/5

Excellent poem, I don't see why anyone would down it. I thought it was very good.

*Blood Shot Eyes*