Hey, I kinda didn't understand this poem but I liked it a lot. it seems really cool and like nothing I've ever read before. good job. 5/5

I think this works really well, short but definitely effective, well done:)

Wonderfully written.... it's a thinker!!!! You know I love all your work! =)hehehehe

Wow 5/5 i really liked this alot u have alot of talent xxx