I like this poem alot, i love how you prtray the normal perosn like saying all the latest clothes and such, then i like ho win the end you were like or i could just be me. Your a great writer and i think the ending and topic with come to you soon.

lots of love
*~*Becky*~*

Please please please choose the latter! Not enough people do. I like that you take a rather different spin on a familiar subject... so many people complain that they hide themselves, but you seem determined to do something about it. Good writing, and good for you.

Nice job the thought is good keep up the good work

I really liked it The message it gave out was great
to be yourself
:) Great job

An interesting read. First two stanzas I feel are the strongest, although the poem as a whole is very well written. I somewhat agree the ending thought could be expanded on. But that's up to you, it still reads well as it is. Thanks for sharing.

Great job, this poem has an amzing message.

Kinda a cliche you knwo the whole putting on a mask thing but over all its a great poem ...so 5/5 and keep up the great work

Loved this poem. It's close to my poem "So I Hide".

Hey, i loved it! excellent poem poem hun! keep up the good work.
**lisa**