Awe Mona...I love this poem. Your emotions definetly show through. Amazing, as always!

Hey hunn, very good once again...is it based on a true experience or were you just inspired by something else? if yo ureally are going through a loss, I'm sending you my love and thoughts, stay strong babe!-xxx-

WOW!!!
well i REALLY like this one
it has the most creative flow to it
and the words are cleverly used!!
great write sweetie as always :P
hope you been ok!
i miss you lots!
loves xxxxxxx

Wow do not know where that inspiration came from but that was an amazing poem.
Well done huni.
Take care
Lots of love,
xoxox

Realy quite amazing...
your wording is always simple yet incredibly powerful..and to every poem i can relate
keep up the good work
you are very talented
lots of love
em xxxxxxxx

Is this a new poem?? very nice ^_^
Rosie xXx

Of God, this is absolutely heartbreaking, but wow beautifully conveyed! Excellent poem!

I liked it. don't take this as an offense but it seemed like there were two different poems in there. feel free to hate me...i don't mind, lol.

Brad

LOL. I Laughed as I made that poem, I'm telling you, I've lost it.Lol...

The first line the flow is kind of bad, it's a lot shorter than the line after it.
Haha..
The poem starts off a little..friendly?

And then it goes..ARGH ARGH..I'm going to kill you! Type of poem..or that's how I see it, and then it goes back to normal..I'm pretty weird, aren't I?