Wow very upforth!
and very virtual!
overall it was really good!

Long I have wanted no e. The one thing in Life not live I ever fought for. I hold it in my hand not holds. I liked the poem it was different and unique. Good job

Good poem, I liked the last stanza alot

Aww that was so good nice job hun 5/5

take care

You have accurately grasped love...this is great : )

Your concept of love is great. The way you write the poem is greater. The impact on the reader after the poem is beyond greatness! I loved your poem :)

Peace. [Sole]