Good poem

Good poem, a little short but that is ok

Watch your spelling, which, not witch. Be sure to stick to a rhyme scheme, or lack there of. You definently have potential, keep it up!

Wonderful, I like the start & the end!
A tiny thing though; why not punctuate it in the formal way?
Another good poem.

Wow holds so much pain...so great though...love it.

Very deep ... very expressive...
lovely
5/5
love
amy

Beautifully brought out what u feel... good poem ! 5/5
love
amy

You paint beautiful imagery, albeit dark imagery, in your poetry, it's excellent.

Peace. [Sole]