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by Alex Marlatt
Good poem, a little short but that is ok
Watch your spelling, which, not witch. Be sure to stick to a rhyme scheme, or lack there of. You definently have potential, keep it up!
Wonderful, I like the start & the end!
A tiny thing though; why not punctuate it in the formal way?
Another good poem.
Wow holds so much pain...so great though...love it.
Very deep ... very expressive...
Beautifully brought out what u feel... good poem ! 5/5
You paint beautiful imagery, albeit dark imagery, in your poetry, it's excellent.