Comments : Out of the Blue

  • 14 years ago

    by Loulou

    Good poem

  • 14 years ago

    by Alex Marlatt

    Good poem, a little short but that is ok

  • 14 years ago

    by Leah20

    Watch your spelling, which, not witch. Be sure to stick to a rhyme scheme, or lack there of. You definently have potential, keep it up!

  • 14 years ago

    by Hareem

    Wonderful, I like the start & the end!
    A tiny thing though; why not punctuate it in the formal way?
    Another good poem.

  • 14 years ago

    by Emma

    Wow holds so much pain...so great though...love it.

  • 14 years ago

    by amelia

    Very deep ... very expressive...
    lovely
    5/5
    love
    amy

  • 14 years ago

    by amelia

    Beautifully brought out what u feel... good poem ! 5/5
    love
    amy

  • 14 years ago

    by Sole

    You paint beautiful imagery, albeit dark imagery, in your poetry, it's excellent.

    Peace. [Sole]