Sounds like a cheating poem... Well to me it does, I have had that happen to me - and it hurts like hell. I hope that that is not what the poem is from, and if so - I'm really sorry, but you know that you're not alone and there's always someone to talk to. :) . As for the writing, it was great. I really really loved it, I could connect with it, I could feel it, and the flow was great. I hope to see alot more from you! 5/5 (but only because I can't rate any higher) Don't change a thing.

I really like this one. I probably like it because I can really relate to it... ALOT... But great job sweetie.

Awesome poem....i really like it...keep writin...laters

This is a great poem. I can def. relate to it! Keep it up. I give you a 5/5!

Really good poem, loved the rhyming pattern, and i relate to it just like most ppl do. 5/5

So much truth in that. I especially liked, "I know who you aren't".