OMG!!!! LOVED IT!!!!! it was soooo good!!!! just awsum like whoa!!! wow! lol -Lucy-

Good but sad at the sametime, if anything is going on, just remember keep ur head up, in time everything gets settle. keep up the good work and take care

Great poem!!!!!! I luved it!

Yeah, an amzing poem, well written and very sad and emotional, i love it
love Tara-Kay xx

Other amazing work you have done. So sad but i love it. keep up the work and you will go far in life with it

*5/5*...luv it...take care....much luv

Noziyna

Omg.. it's wonderful..

It's how I feel.. u jus put it into better words than I could ever imagine.

excellent! keep it up

Aww hun, your poems are always so sad. Do you really feel like this? Because, no matter what, your beautiful to all of us. 5/5

Woahh, that was awesome...i got these shivers in the last stanza, it heaps good

Dayum nice poem. haha

That was beautful..very touching, it spoke 2 me. try and keep ur chin up :)