WOW!!!! I LOVE IT!!!!!!!!! I especially like the way the speed of the poem reflects the speed in the subject matter! Yet another brilliante uno lu!

ps. sorry I haven't called in ages, I'm bogged down in coursework...in fact in all kinds of work come to that! love to you and everyone else! miss you all lots! xxxxxxxx

Ok...breathe maddy...breathe....THAT WAS AMAZING!!!! *hyperventilates* i can't beleive you wrote that a whole 7 days ago and i didn;t realise!!!it was soooo goooooood! you have such an amazingly wonderful skill!!!!! *dances with joy*

Good

.....really sounds like a train speedin' on down those tracks.......well-done...wonderful alliteration....all very effective....