Nice job hun keep up the good work very sweet like the word you used. 5.5

I think you should quickly expand this poem. It certainly has great potential for something more. I like the way you used light and fire to relate your emotions. These are great sets of words and you did a wonderful job in the flow. I'm looking forward to more of this. Thanks for sharing. =)

Wow i love the imagery the entire atmosphere to the poem was just excellent i like the flow and rhyming also great job on that you are very talented...im looking forward to read more poems from you!! 5/5

I think it's fine even if it's short. it works to me and it's great. 5/5 !props!