Hey lauren i feel just like u my x lives across the street and she keeps poping in my life and i cant let go maybe u would like my poems email me if u want maybe we could help eachother

Wow even though dis is lyk yr second peom or sumfin its still gwd...luv dia mwaz xoxo

Good for the start of what looks to be talent. Despite its shortness and the ending which is missing something it was good. Nice start and as mentioned above this is beginning to look like some talent.
~Fallen