The only time me and my dad really get on is when I agree to whatever he wants to do.

I love how much emotion is portrayed in your poem.

Lv A, x

Great poem. i dont really get on with either of my parents, so i can relate in a way. you put a lot of emotion into this and protrayed it very well

Really nice i really liked this and i sorta know how you feel... my dad is an a** too... nice job with your poem you did a very nice job...

keep it up

sammie

It was very long, but really good, expressed emotions well. well done.
keep it up
tara xxxxxxxxxx

I love that
im sorry if any of it is true
its amazing
and have u told ur dad any of this
if so i need some advise on how to tell my dad to leave me alone
he has cause me so much pain and i would like it if u could help me sometime
and if u ever need anything just email me or comment me and ask if we could talk
5/5
Bye

Thats how i feel with a mom and step dad...i hate mine and step mom...you said you liked my poems part one and two of perfect life...well most of it is about my dad...some my grandpa and ex boyfriend...but mostly my dad...:( i understand how you feel and i'm sorry good luck!!!