Comments : My Son Neighbour's Hell

  • 18 years ago

    by PURE HEART

    Great dear.
    afterall u hav entered homour poems too. nice to see that!!!
    well its lovely that u hav a kid(boy) who is like u. i think he will be proud to have a great poet as his father :0)

    well i like this poem . its straight from ur heart.......
    keep it up!!!!!!

  • 18 years ago

    by Monique

    Haha omg, loved the ending! It was so serious then you totally changed it at the end, I love it. True talent:P. Did you truly just have a boy? Or is it just a fake? Well, good job on this poem, keep it up hun.
    xoxo Monique

  • 18 years ago

    by chavii

    Well same question ,do u have kid ?
    If yes congrats n if its fiction , i enjoyed reading it lot .

  • 18 years ago

    by EmptyEyes

    Haha. kool.

  • 18 years ago

    by Princess Love

    You know I loved this poem about my Cutie. Quiet surprised why I never commented on it. Well, all I can say in shortcut is like fater like son. :-)

    Great job on telling the story. Absolutely adored it.

    Lots of Love
    Michelle

  • 17 years ago

    by Gem

    Hehe, i especially loved the ending on this. I'd love to have a birthday on the 1st April but i guess i'll just have to settle for November 29th =)
    w00t!
    5/5
    *Gem*

  • 17 years ago

    by Cindy

    Nitin
    This piece brought on the smiles. I can't imagine anyone not wanting you next door :)

    what if he not only looks like me but is like me??

    well dear neighbours all i can say....welcome to HELL!!

    I love this ending ...lol.....Your son is very lucky to look like you. I hope he turns into a kind and caring man just like his Dad.
    Excellent job dost.
    Love Cindy