Hey Tiffani!!
Love this poem!
Made me think about the feelings I went through that was exactly like this!
I so understand this line:
"i CAN live without you,
i just don't want to..."

Tho one thing: Maybe the line:
maybe even Divine...
but no one knows in which the wrath you wish to pine... (is kinda long??)

Hehe well, great poem :D
Loved it!! xoxo
Laterz,
Shirlz

THANKS

Oh wow, I know exactly what this feels like. In fact I'm feeling this right now... it's like you either want them back with all of your heart, or you wish you never knew them in the first place. Well I just wanted to tell you that I really liked this poem, you should continue to write!

I like that poem and I understanding even though i have gone through that stage yet, but i love the wordings you have used, very nice job, xoxo Rach

Thanks Tiny and Devil. your comments rally do mean alot to me... thanks again, i willl be sure to return the favor!!

LoVeZ
tIfFaNi

That is such a great poem, it speaks to me. Keep up the great work

That is such a great poem, it speaks to me. Keep up the great work

Thanks. Thats what i write poems for!!

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T!ff@n!

Lol yeah they were. but thank u very much!!

TaKe CaRe,,

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T!FF@N!

Wow that was amazing. i loved it! 5/5
~*Katherine*~

Thank you very much!!!!!!

TaKe CaRe,,

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T!FF@N!

Thank u very much!!

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