Great Ghazal... A superb subject beautifully constructed. I really enjoyed this :)

This is a wonderful write Steve..... still not sure if I can do a Ghazal myself, but I will give it a shot. I truly enjoyed this one though.

Smiles, Hugs and Love, Angela

Wow, wonderfully written, great job!

Great job with this style, i've never read one before. it's intresting and sounds a little confusing, i give you credit you get some pretty hard forms and you make them seem so easy.

~Jacklyn

First of all thank you for the comments on my poem.

This is really well done. Seems like a bit of a challenge with the format but you did very well. I don't know if I could ever be so strict with my writing :) I have enough trouble with free verse! Its a wonderful piece.

Your so talented omg ur poem is so good.. please check out my new one!! mwa stephy :)

This was interesting, there's many traditional/fixed forms I'm not familiar with and was impressed with this one, a really good flow with a definite meaning behind it.Very clever.I'll have to frequent your work more often, not just to learm more on the different forms, but because you are so talented and your poems say so much.

It's a very good poem! I gave it a 5!

I enjoyed the instruction and learning something new. Nice poem. Good instruction. Thanks

Not my form of choice but well done.