Hey i liked it. I had to read it twice then it sank in. Intense,... to me

Wow. that was a beautiful poem! the imagry was so amazing. the vocabluary was advanced and intresting.

Ruby

Very deep and full of bitter truth, yet expressed so effectively that it fills the purpose of the poem.
Good work!

Wow...this took my breath away....love this.

Your poetry is so deep - it is really heartfelt, and so sad again! Keep writing.

Peace. [Sole]

Wow...I'm speechless. This is very well-written poem...I love it! 5/5

Thanks for your comment on my poem!

~Kelly