This is a really good poem and i really like it ! plz comment on mine!

Yep it sre was based on sumthin i reali went thru.. i onli write from experience

This is REALLY good, and i've read a lot of love poems...

Thank u hun =)

Good job there haylie! and it's great 2 c another aussie!!! *grins* ahhh.. the sunburnt land... lol... good poem. it was very honest but not too needy... lovely work keep it up! thanks 4 the comment! MUCH appriciated! c ya darl!

I loved it. It flowed really good too which makes reading it more fun!