Comments : The virus

  • 18 years ago

    by Emily parsons

    Brilliantly written
    melancholic and dark
    yet beautiful to read
    xxxxx kep up the good work

  • 18 years ago

    by ЀvÏL

    Thank u so much and i have been always a fan of your poems...stay strong and believe in your self always....take care

  • This is such a haunting write. beautifully morbid in it's essence of truth. well written!

  • 18 years ago

    by midnight♥lullibys

    Haha how do you stalk the earth?did youmean walk? trive or something like that would work also but i dont think stalk fits...other then that great job very myserious!! 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by VioletRaven

    I think this poem works very well, the expression is dark and the words leave the reader haunted long after finishing. An excellent piece, well done.

    *VioletRaven*

  • 18 years ago

    by shygirl

    Thankz 4 readin my poem i read urs i really injoyed it n gave u a 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Leah20

    Very nice, I really loved this poem. It is sadly true. Whether our virus be greed, selfishness or any other form of malice, it seems to be speading like wildfire throughout our world.

  • 18 years ago

    by ASPHYXIATED

    Heya!

    I really liked this one, short yet powerful!
    Well written and a great idea!
    Your word usage rocked also!

    Thanks for your comments mean alot xD

    -xo

  • 18 years ago

    by Samantha

    Wow this was so well written... it gave me chills when i read it.. you are so very talented and just an amazing writer... keep it up...

    sammie

  • 18 years ago

    by Little Dot

    Wonderful work, once again. This poem was done so well. It has great imagery, and was amazingly written.

  • 18 years ago

    by Darien

    Excellent poem.. very dark. Each word pounding readers with intense fear. good job.

  • 18 years ago

    by Allison

    Very dark and very well written. You have a lot of talent. Keep up the good work. *5/5*

  • 18 years ago

    by Rena

    You are an amazing writer. keep it up. you truly bring out so much emotion!!!

  • 18 years ago

    by Amanda

    Brilliant piece of work hun, well done and keep writing. You have a great talent and i loved the poem. Thanks for reading mine :)

  • 18 years ago

    by End Of Eternity

    M really having some fun in this site nowdays...great poets are commenting on my work and i m getting chance to know them...every day i m realizing how big this site is..:o)

    this one was just so deep, really loved it...great work indeed

    take care and all the best

  • 18 years ago

    by Charlisha

    Im just takin a guess cause I usually dont read poems like this, but your title stood out. But is the virus "Death"?...or not, im just confused.

  • 18 years ago

    by MaSkEdSoUl

    I also loved it I gave it 5/5!!

  • 18 years ago

    by mydearestsuicide

    Well written!!! keep it up 5/5 ;) thanks for the comment its much appreciated

  • 18 years ago

    by Megann Lee

    Ohh, very powerful, and deep, lots of meaning and darkness. I love it.