So sad and yet beautiful. A very heartfelt write. A beautiful expression.

Wow, this is some sad stuff! Heartbreaking, but wonderfully written!

Very deep and emotional! Gut wrenchingly sad. Wonderfully done :)

As always a joy to read!

Wow I really like this poem
sorry i couldnt have returned the favour sooner
you have an awesome way with words
Thanks for your kind comment
Em

Wow Gesselle, this is a really sad poem. The flow was excellent, I could almost hear it being spoken to me. It's like I'm in the picture, and everything is happening. That's really awesome :)

Gesselle
A very heartfelt write. So sad. Great job.

Love ya, Ann

0h huni a heartfelt piece l0t 0f em0ti0n in this. such a t0uchiing piece man... very sad i liked the w0rds used th0ugh and the ay its been written. g0od j0b darl. very well written. =)

l0tz 0f l0ve / d0ra
-*x00o00x*-

Gesselle,

This is a very sad emotional write, it pulls at the heart strings.

Warmest regards,

Steve

Awesome poem Gesselle!!! I really liked it alot. ^_^

~Anthony

Gesselle,

Rachael must be a jealous girl who wishes she had the talent to write the way you do. Don't take those words to heart, because your poetry is beautiful... you are one of the most amazing writers I have ever seen on this site. That is alot coming from me, because I have high standards when I read people's writing. But you my dear, have a talent that I can only dream of. Keep writing, don't you ever stop doing what you love to do. I'm looking forward to reading more of yours soon =)

I like it, good work 5/5

OmG ur so talented.. ur poems fantastic well done and keep up the great work!! mwaz stephy :)

Very heartfelt write...... but beautiful choice of words