I loved it. Very strong Feelings and very good similes. This is great keep it up.
Heather

I hope she sees this poem and appreicates the love of her son.

-Tainted Mikochan

To long man, shorten ur stuff. good luck.

I loved it just like all your others
even though it was long it still had the feelings put into like a good poem should
great write

**binkz**