Oh sweet memories.

I feel for you dude.
:(
anyway much better
very deserving of a 5/5
The title was very creative. Very original.
Lovin' it
~Emah

I thought the poem was intense, and you really expressed your feelings through this poem well. I thought some of the rhymes were forced, however. Your use of imagery and expression were clearly there. Great Job.

The trigger was your hate.
((I loved this line.))

This was excellent.. Very dark and simply wonderful. I adore the ending, great job, again.

xDarkSuicidex 5.5

Sorry it took so long.. Thanksgiving week and all.. This poem is as great as the others.. I loved it, you have great rhyming skills and an awesome imagination I love this stanza the best:
I remember we had so much fun,
on our very first date.
Love came in the form of a gun,
the trigger was your hate.

Great job! i loved it! it's sosad and very emotional but awesome!!!!!

I really liked this one. it flowed great and the imagery was very good.
the only thing i can really say about it is this line seems to short-
I believed them all.
i think you should add something.
maybe 'To think I believed them all.
Or maybe osmthing else. but to me it does seem to shoort of a line.

Good Job. =]

x3 Lauren

Keep this up and you'll be my fav....5/5

I really like this poem, but I think what I like most is the title, it's so catchy and just screams 'read me'. I like the way you said her love was a gun and her hate was the trigger, I don't know why, but that's just amazing to me, great job. 5/5