"you make the storm clouds disappear and the sky change from gray"

i love that line amazing poem. and you should also tell the person you love you love them. it's a regret that will always last a life time. nic epoem keep up the good work

Quite good, i don't mean to be rude or anything but i believe you need a little help, if i may... I could help you, although i still LOVED the vibes to this poem, keep it up

Ruby

Wow! i really like this one. thanx for tha comment about my love demanding pt.4. it meanz a lot 2 me!!!
visit my page ne time,
xoxo
Amber

I like it. seams u put alot of effort into your work but from what iv jst read its worth the effort keep the good work coming x x x

Your a great writer keep it up

Great poem
Thanx for commented on Ashli's work :)

I like this poem its good

Cute poem...im sure she knows how much u care about her. keep it up

Wow that poem was really good. guys like you let us girls know that there is hope in the world =) keep it up. you have amazing work

Omg that poem is amazing! keep it up!

WOW your poems just get better and better. THe way u spill ur love for her is so refreshing..i love it. keep it up.

ur friend
Lissa

I like this!!!

Wow.. seems to me like you really do love her. very good poems boy, i mean it.