Hey....i loved the story line and how it was written...well done.... but i think that if she cheated then its her mistake but every1 makes mistakes... but if they really did love each other they would stil be 2getherand fight for their love(sorry if that sounds weired)....and if you do like this guy you should follow your heart....well take care i hope everything works out thanks so much for your comment it means alot....keep shining...love JoSiE....

Hi, thankyou for youre comment you sent me it does mean alot,
this poem was really well written and so are many of your others you are an awesome writer, with what seems like a natural writting ability!
anyways keep it up and please keep writing!
5/5, good job
take care,
holly

Your so talented omg ur poem is so good.. please check out my new one!! mwa stephy :)

Thanks to all of you people who commented.:D

Sonia,such awonderful poem,you are awesome at writing,keep it up and
thanks alot for your comment it means alot
always smile :)
5/5

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