Its good

Short but good, well done
tara-kay

Very short, but still good

Other great poem, short but well written i like it alot. Keep up the great work

Well i am not too sure i get it at all but thats just me. nice try keep it up

Well i am not too sure i get it at all but thats just me. nice try keep it up

Well i am not too sure i get it at all but thats just me. nice try keep it up

I agree it's short but a nice poem

Short but nice. Not your best work but it was good.

4/5, West