That was good.. everything flowed well and moved smoothly.. thanks for the comment on my poem.. cYa ~D~

Hmm well if i hadnt read the end i would have no clue what you were saying anyhow it was good umm and can make a new poem i want to se what you can do with a longer poem

Wow that was deep i hearts it babes ^_^

Amazing poem....I know it has been a while, I just wanted to stop by and tell you that I like your poem a lot. Well done.

Nahibi this is a good poems from teneka

Good job tapping into his mind. "I love the guilt" I love this line, it makes us see why he can't stop.

Good job tapping into his mind. "I love the guilt" I love this line, it makes us see why he can't stop.