I like this poem very much. I have a few suggestions though, but don't change it if you don't want to.

1.Edit the last 5 verses, they all star with and.

2. I think that the "I'm In love I'm In Love I'm In Love part, should happen more than once in the poem, but that is just me.

Keep up the good work.

5/5

First let me say the poem was very
sweet and I really liked it . But you
you made a few mistakes that need
to be fix . The first mistake I noticed
was that, you started off as if you were
telling your feelings to the reader .
But then you switched as if you were
talking to her . For example : Her
personality is as sweet as can be .( But
then you switched over to ) Showing me
more of you section by section . you see it kind of makes it hard to follow .
And also you should try to space it out
more so your words won't look so
scrambled, go back edit and use spell
check . Well other then those simple
mistakes that a lot of poets make . I
really liked the poem . I think it was
excellent and I give you a 5/5 . Keep
up the good work . I'll be keeping
my eye on you .

your new fan
Letty

I also agree with lostsoul .

Hey there! I really liked it! I'm afraid I'm going to have to disagree with letty in the whole changing person thing. I do that and I don't intent for people to be confused but I dunno... I just like it. my point is I thought it was really beautiful the only thing I could say is that it could flow a bit better here is where I agree with Letty LOL! anyway... LOVED it... I wish my guy was more romantic like that *sighs*... keep it up man... I'll b watching :D

Wow that was great. I really liked it. Keep up the good work. *5/5*

That is really, really, really good. I loved ur word choices!

That's a really good poem. 5/5 definitely.