There's a song called Unbreakable that gets to me, so I wrote this poem to try and capture how I feel when I hear it.

Erik Its amazing how you talk anbotu lvoe..and ur not in a relationship (no offense) thats amazingggg. hope u find sumone soon. good luck and keep writing....plaease read soem more stuff liek Sombody Please Love Her, Suicidal Romance, Sw33t Misery, Come get ME and Anotehr Round...bye!

Excellent job man, really good, I liked it, Loved the rhythm, Your word choice and detail structure you put into it....really well written 5/5 great job
ttyl sometime
PeAcE
~The Poet~

Interesting, very romantic