Boy u shouldnt give up on love. love is like a butterfly it might fly away but u might just ahve to go and try and catch it. now its a very hard thign to try to acomplish. and if u just lt it go so easily u wont be able to catch another butterfly so easly or if u do it wont be the same as that first butterfly. but one butterfly is better then non!. great ending to ur poem but never give up on love. o and if its not to much to ask can u check out my featured poem meek i would like to get some feedback on it:P.

p.s. its an aweosome poem keep writing.
sonia

Wow that is awesome i just love it, keep in touch, your an amazing writer!