Comments : Until I met you

  • 18 years ago

    by LostSoul

    This is really gooooooooooood and it is goooooooooood for you. Haha. Lol, great poem, let's honour for a while shall we? *moment of silence* Okay finished, keep up the good work, and if you don't then I will hurt you. Haha. 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Poetvoices

    This is wonderful! It's so beautiful! Thanks for gracing me w/ the oppurtunity to read such lovely works!! 5/5. You never cease to amaze w/ your incredible talent.

    Love, Poetvoices

  • 18 years ago

    by obsessedgurl

    This one was good! 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Reem O

    Woow, I think every one can relate to ur poem who has this special person.Very emotinal 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Tim Bradshaw

    Great poem really heartfilled and emotional. I had one problem with reading it tho. In the 3rd stanze you said Until the day I met you my life was changed around. When i read it it sounds like you should mean when i met you my life changed around. Also in the 4th stanze you wrote the word (are) and it should be (our). Other than that I loved it.

  • 18 years ago

    by Kelly

    Very nice poem... a few grammatical errors but I do the same thing when I am evoking an emotion. It's not always about the perfect grammar but about the way it makes someone feel. Great job.

  • 17 years ago

    by Goran Rahim

    One of the greatest poem that i ever read in this site, you have put many strong words togheter and created a great poem, i can really relate to this poem, great job and 5/5