So sad...very mournful....beautifully written my friend, but it is never better to be alone *hey, did I write that?* It is never better to be alone.

Darn this is sad, but so nicely conveyed! Excellent writing!

Gesselle
So sad....I don't know which is worse, being alone by yourself or being with someone and still feeling alone. touching write.....

Love ya, Ann

So sad... We've all had this feeling from time to time, but you've conveyed the emotion so well... Beautifully written.

0hhh gesselle. l0t 0f em0ti0n in this t0o. very heartfelt =(

l0tz 0f l0ve / d0ra
-*x00o00x*-

Great good but being alone makes space for new luv to enter but this was perfect 5/5*

Me da tristeza que tengas que escribir poesia tan triste. Escribes muy bien, pero parece que sufres de algun dolor. Espero todo este bien. Este poema fue excelente, sigue escribiendo, y gracias por compartir tu talento con nosotros.

Hey, really good job. i'm so srry ur going through a rough time right now. try not to think of the future. keep ur mind on the good things

There is that one guy for you and he's out there somewhere. just wait and you'll see him one day. don't let this get you down. there's always something else to look forward to. take care and thanks for all your comments on my poems.

-PG-

Ah, that's like how I've been feeling these past few days. Great poem, I love it.

This is good, really good. And of course sad, really sad! Only thing i would suggest changing is the second-to-last line...

"Maybe IT'S just better" or something similar.

such small room for improvement in a poem of this though, it's really good Gesselle. The best poem I've ever seen by an infant also :P

kidding, I know you're not really 1 year old.

Aww Gesselle, don't worry you aren't alone anymore. I am here for you :)

Gesselle,

This is a state that we have all known at one time or another in our lives and I dread the feeling because it bings on so much depression. A well written poem.

Warmest regards,

Steve

Been away for awhile. Great poem!!! Very deep and powerful!!

Your so talented omg ur poem is so good.. please check out my new one!! mwa stephy :)

Hey this is a great poem i really love it
5/5 keep up the good work.
Leona

I like it

I like it

Wow this is a really great poem. You are a really good writer. Keep up the excellent work.

Its relly good....thats tha way i feel sumtims......
keep riting
xoxoxoxox